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I'm stealing this for Thorny Thursday...And ya can't stop me, lessen ya duel me. :)

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Lol, I’m glad you deem it worthy.

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Lovely! I think next time you could try a more elaborate exchange of stabs and slashes. A more reserved scene does work well here since you established our protagonist as a sword noob but master of the gun.

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Thanks! I actually did plan a more elaborate story, just ran out of time.

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You did good! The next story will be just as fancy as you wanted this one to be :D

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