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The Man Behind the Screen's avatar

Some great fun had in this story; a brief but dramatic duel with a distinct and colorful cast. Simple, but highly effective.

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Amanda V Shane's avatar

Ah, a duel to win the lady! I love historicals. Great job with this one!

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MaKenna Grace's avatar

Thank you!

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Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

I'm stealing this for Thorny Thursday...And ya can't stop me, lessen ya duel me. :)

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MaKenna Grace's avatar

Lol, I’m glad you deem it worthy.

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The Black Knight's avatar

Lovely! I think next time you could try a more elaborate exchange of stabs and slashes. A more reserved scene does work well here since you established our protagonist as a sword noob but master of the gun.

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MaKenna Grace's avatar

Thanks! I actually did plan a more elaborate story, just ran out of time.

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The Black Knight's avatar

You did good! The next story will be just as fancy as you wanted this one to be :D

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