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Love PNR | Kestrel Caim's avatar

Really well done. Your voice is sharp, confident, and the tension between Morvinus and Amber crackled. Curious to see where you’re taking this.

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MaKenna Grace's avatar

Thank you! That means a lot. It was originally just this part. And I was happy to let it end here. The muses, however, had other plans, as it usually goes. Now, nearly 50k words later it’s still growing.

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Stephen Duffy's avatar

This was great! Looking forward to reading part 2 ❤️

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MaKenna Grace's avatar

I’m glad to hear it, Stephen! There’s certainly plenty more, lol. The next chapter drops in just a few hours. The story is almost complete.

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The Vampire Dorian Moreau's avatar

You have ensnarled me with your words….reading this was delicious!

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MaKenna Grace's avatar

Why thank you, kind sir! You flatter me.

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Esom's avatar

Not my heart racing alongside that of Ms Hollings. I absolutely love this story

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MaKenna Grace's avatar

Aw, thank you! I’m do glad you like it!

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Esom's avatar

Like it? No no.

I love it! 🙂‍↕️😌

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Anne-Marie Hubert's avatar

Great first chapter. Completely loved this take on a vampire story.

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MaKenna Grace's avatar

Aw, thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it. When I finished this chapter, I honestly never expected it to continue. But the muses had other plans, lol.

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Anne-Marie Hubert's avatar

Ah! That’s great. I can see it as a standalone, but I’m glad you continued; feels like a lot more can be said here.

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Marta's avatar

Giggling and kicking my feet as I read this!

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MaKenna Grace's avatar

Thanks for reading! I’m glad you enjoyed it.

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Ooh nicely done! I was right there with her!

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MaKenna Grace's avatar

Thanks!

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The Black Knight's avatar

Ms. Hollings is nearly suicidal in her want to learn more. Vampires are not to be trifled with. Great story!

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MaKenna Grace's avatar

Thank you! I’m glad you liked it!

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The Black Knight's avatar

Again, the only way I can restack is from another… restack. lol

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Bill Hiatt's avatar

Some nice twists on the traditional vampire story. Researching vampires? How risky!

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MaKenna Grace's avatar

Thank you! I’ve certainly gone down some pretty deep rabbit (or vampire) holes myself over the years, lol.

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