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Kestrel Caim | PNR + Romantasy's avatar

I loved this chapter. Your voice feels so authentic, like someone quietly recounting something that actually happened. And the way you used dog expressions to describe the vampire’s look? Perfect. I could see his face exactly.

MaKenna Grace's avatar

I’m so glad you like it! Facial expressions are difficult to convey sometimes so I’m glad to know this one translated well.

Leanne Shawler's avatar

I am glad there’s a part 4 out!

The Black Knight's avatar

He is gorging on her blood!