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Anne-Marie Hubert's avatar

I truly love this dynamics between the two main characters. I don't know where it's going exactly. Great tension too. Well done.

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MaKenna Grace's avatar

Thanks so much! I’m so happy to see you’re enjoying it! To be honest I’m a go-with-the-flow pantser when it comes to my writing so I never know where it’s going either, which is part of the fun. I do worry incessantly about plot holes though, lol.

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Anne-Marie Hubert's avatar

That must be particularly stressful when posting serials here. Great job!

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MaKenna Grace's avatar

Thanks! It can be, but I kind of like not knowing where it’s going. Makes it more enjoyable that way, like I’m more a spectator than a creator.

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Oooh, he’s compelled to protect her. I think I found this late so I’m off to see if there is more yet!

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